- Study Type: Written clinical trial Randomized. Correct it to clinical study.

- Fund amount: Written 10000. Without specifying the type of currency. And I think this amount is small.

- 1Co-Investigator No 1: Rewrite name of the PI.

- Primary Objective: Written to prepare functional, sugar-free boba pearls from selenium and stevia. What is the relation of selenium to this study.

- Hypothesis, Rationale and Scientific Validity: Written information about the Procedure in Details (Work steps until the statistical analysis).

- Background: The way the references are placed is causing confusion. How to cite references. It can be placed in parentheses.

- Sample size and groups: Written Sample size; n = 18 participants Allowing for ~20–25% dropout, recruit 22–24 participants. Did not refer to the distribution of the experimental groups.

- Paragraph (Randomization & blinding): Repeated the same statement mentioned earlier in Procedure in Details Under the same title.

-  Paragraph (B. Preparation Procedure): Repeated the same statement mentioned earlier in Procedure in Details Under the same title.

- Paragraph (Effective dose): Written No known toxic effects for Matcha and Moringa powders. Confirmation of that with references is required

- Paragraph (Side effects): Written No known toxic effects at the doses used. Confirmation of that with references is required.

- In answer about question (Explain how you will, if applicable and appropriate): The answer was Not Applicable. How?

- In Consent Form: Written number of the participants in the study is 48 Volunteer. While it is written 24 in Gantt-Chart and 18 in Ethics Committee Form. Correct that.

- In Consent Form: Written age of the participants 20-30 years. While it is written 40-45 years in Ethics Committee Form. Correct that.