- Protocol Title in English: Write the English name before the scientific name.

- Protocol Title in Arabic: Writing the scientific name after the Arabic name (سايسيريا كوستيس )

- تصحيح الغير مكبسلة الى غير المكبسلة

- تصحيح الاصطناعية الى الصناعية

- Duration of the study: Written one month. While, it is written in Gantt-Chart two months. This period is very very short, since the protocol involves lab work, animals and human (Sensory Evaluation).

- Submission Type: Written Re-submission, How?

- In response to the question (The protocol was reviewed by scientific reviewing committee): The answer No. How? the protocol is Ph.D. Theis.

- Funding Agent: Written Self. How? the protocol is Ph.D. Theis. And fund from the NRC.

- Fund amount: Written Self. How?. And the amount is not written.

- Research Team: Co-Investigator 1 and 2: Written in the procedure he /she is responsible for: المشرف الرئيسى من المركز القومى للبحوث والمشرف الرئيسى من الجامعة   

- The number of supervisors for the thesis is 2. I think there are not enough supervisors.

- Subject Area: Written Biochemistry, Immunology. Correction required.

- Procedure in Details: No. 12 (Studding the toxicity of different types of synthetic flavor enhancers). Written on humane cells line models (in vitro). The source and details were not mentioned.

- The number of rats that will be sacrificed to take the internal organs was not mentioned.

- No. 15 Sensory evaluation: Nothing was written about how to implement it (type, number of volunteers, the parameters, and Consent Form).

- Flow-Charts: Not written well (Data and Design).

- In response to a question (Does this protocol involve the use of substances that may pose any health risk). The answer No. How?. The work involves use Human cell line – Animals internal Organs – Blood samples - chemicals.

- List of References: Divided into two times. And The number of references is much higher (53 ref.) than what is presence in the text (25 ref.).

- Application for Research Studies Involving Animals: Total Number: Written 60 rat. How? It was previously written in Biological Evaluation 80 rat (8 groups, 10 rat each) And also in other places.

- Attach Documents: The proposal Does not contain Form 85 (for Thesis), but contains Form 90 only.