1.      The title should include the study on albino mice.

2.      The type of study is an experimental/ animal study and not an observational/cohort study, which are epidemiologic/human type of study.

3.      Please state the fund amount

4.      The study lacks a member who will be responsible for animal procedures

5.      What procedures will be done to the 9 groups (like drug doses and administration methods)? Does it include invasive techniques like injections? What about the expected side effects of the treatment and administration?

6.      The flowchart lacks the details of procedures that will be done for the 9 groups.

7.      Is this a repetition of a previous study? Yes, Noori et al. (2011): please explain why you repeat this study.

8.      The applicant has uploaded an informed consent form (which is not required in an animal study) instead of the commitment form. Please, upload the filled "commitment form" from the templates.

9.      The PI signed: نموذج إقرار للباحثين بشأن الرعاية الجيدة للحيوانات المستخدمة في البحوث

10.  This form should include the name and signature of the person who is responsible for dealing with animals. The PI mentioned that her areas of expertise are “solid state physics,” and her role will be preparing the magnetic nanoparticles.