1. The Arabic title needs to include the name of the plant: ديدونيا فيسكوزا (Dodonaea viscosa).

2. The principal investigator's (PI) department and institute were not mentioned.

3. The methodology lacks clarity; the PI used abbreviations without providing detailed explanations. The PI did not clarify whether the in vitro study involves tissue culture or describe how they will determine the lethal concentration (LC50) and by what means. Additionally, it is unclear how they plan to assess anti-inflammatory effects without using animal models.